یہ تو ممکن نہیں کہ من دیکھو

Poet: azharm
By: Azhar, Doha

یہ تو ممکن نہیں کہ من دیکھو
آدمی کا مگر سخن دیکھو

کوئی گُل چیں یہاں سے گزرا ہے
اُجڑا اُجڑا سا ہے چمن دیکھو

آگ بھڑکے گی ایک دن لازم
میرے سینے میں ہے اگن، دیکھو

ان کی گفتار پر نہیں جانا
ان کا کردار، ان کا فن دیکھو

عشق کا کام ڈوب جانا ہے
حسن والوں کا حسن ظن دیکھو

موت سے کیا مجھے ڈراو گے
باندھ رکھا تو ہے کفن دیکھو

ہاں، گُھٹن ہے، چَہَار سو اظہر
چل پڑے گی ابھی پَوَن دیکھو

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10 May, 2012

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Mohtarim janab Nadeem sahib
shukr guzaar ke ap Qalem Fursaa huay, maazret ki zarooret hi nahin jnab. asal main arabi say mustaar alfaz ki nisbet farsi say deraamed shudaa alfaaz mujhay bhi akser dhoka day jatay hain ke Urdu seekhtay zada arsa nahin hua . aur phir hum log aik doosray say hi seekhtay na G
ap ki rai ka ainda bhi shiddet say intezaar rahay ga
naik tamanain qabool kijiay
AzharM

By: Azhar, Doha on May, 29 2012

shukria waqai ye lafz mery leyey izafa tha
hota yon hy k bohat se lafz hamari roz marah k istamal main naheen hotey
is lafz k sath bhi kuch yahi hwa
ye lafz hamari urdu ka hy hamain azeez hy
qalam farsaee ki mazrat

By: nadeem murad, umtata south africa on May, 27 2012

Mohtarma Uzma G,
tah e dil say shukr guzaar hun itni pazeerai kay liay. aksar o baishter hosla afzai farmati hain ap aur woh bhi khulay dil say
naik tamanain qabool kijiay
best regards n wishes 4 U G
Azhar

By: Azhar, Doha on May, 24 2012

Mohtarim nadeem sahib,
jazzak Allah khair, jahan tuk sawal hai tarkeeb ka to chahaar urdu zubaan main hi muravij hai aur mutafaraq qawamees main is ka zikr milay ga. main feroz ul lughat say istefada karta hun amoomen.
chahar : char 4
chahar chand : chaar gunna 4times
chahar su : charon taraf
chahar shanbha : budh ka din
aisi kafi amsaal maujood hain
aur jahan tuk narazgi ka taaluq hai, to ilmi bahoos main is ki qat-en gunjaish nahin hoti. ilm jahan say milay main hasil karta hun aur jahan koi maloomat meray pas maujood hai usay batanay main koi jhijhak mehsoos nahin karta G
be had shukr guzar hun ap ka
best regards n wishes 4 U
Azhar

By: Azhar, Doha on May, 24 2012

buhat umda khayal; behtreen alfaz aap ki kawishen hamariweb poetry page pe achha izafa hain
nihayat klhubsurat andaz se khayal qalambnd krnay ka fann jante hain aap bhi mukhtasir aur mozun ghazal khubsurat takhayul o bayan ka haseen imtezaj you also have briliant sense of poetry
khush rahain likhte rahain

By: uzma, Lahore on May, 22 2012

MASHALLAH AAP KI TAQREEBAN SAREE HI SHAERY KO PArHA KAHEEN BHI WAZAN KI KHARABI NAZAR NAHEEN AAEE
OR BALKE ZABAN PR UBOOR BHI NAZAR AAYA
MERA SAWAL WAZAN K MUTALIQ NAHEEN THA
TARKEEB K MUTALIQ THA YE CHAHAR SO KIS ZABAN KA LAFZ HY
CHAR (4) TO URDU MAIN MUSTAMIL HY
MAIN SAMJHA AAP KITABAT KI GHALTI KI TARAF KAHEEN GY
KION K MISRA AGAR YON HO TO
HAN GHUTAN HY YE CHAR SO AZHAR
TO AASAN LAFZON MAIN MISRA WAZAN MAIN BHI BETHTA HY
BAQI YE TAQTEE MAIN NE KABHI NAHEEN KI AAP BEHTAR SAMAJH SAKTEY HAIN
AAP KO NARAZ KRNA MAQSAD NAHEEN THA
HAMARI WEB MAIN NE KUCH HI DIN SI PArHNA SHURO KI HAY SIWAEY AAP K ABHI KOI SHAER WAZAN MAIN NAHEEN NAZR AAYA.
AAP SE BOHAT KUCH SEKHAIN GY, INSHALLAH
ZEHMAT KI MAZRAT
WASSALAM

By: nadeem, umtata s africa on May, 22 2012

mohtarim Nadeem sahib pasandeedgi kay liay shukriya
ghazel beher e khafeef main mauzoon hai jis kay afaeel
fa-e-la-tn + m-fa-e-ln + fe-ln
ha-g-tn-he + c-ha-r-su + le-kn
haan-gh-ten-hai + ch-ha-r-su+ le-kin
umeed hai ke wazahet ho jayay gi
best wishes n regards 4 U G
AzharM

By: Azhar, Doha on May, 21 2012

achi ghazal hy mgr ye char so ki jaga chahar so ki tarkeeb samajh naheen aaee

By: nadeen, umtata south africa on May, 19 2012

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