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Keep it up
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By:
Fayyaz,
Karachi
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May, 03 2018
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Very nice
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By:
Ali,
Islamabad
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Mar, 14 2018
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all people are pretending like they are tensed and worried for other, like they feel the pain for other but actually it didn't so happened. the reality is totally different and pathetic. All are spectators , nobody cares for other , just create dramas from others problems and difficulties.
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By:
sumaira,
islamabad
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Nov, 13 2017
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bohat awlaaa larrki ...... mubarak ho jeetney k liye
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By:
sana,
Lahore
on
Nov, 23 2016
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| بہت بہت شکریہ اس محبت کے لیئے ثناء جی نوازش |
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By:
Haya Ghazal,
Karachi
on
Nov, 24 2016
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| آپ سب کا بے حد شکریہ انشاءاللہ آگے جن خامیوں کی نشاندہی کی گئ اگلی تحریروں میں کوشش کریں گے نہ ہوں. اللہ خوش اور سلامت رکھے.آمین |
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By:
Haya Ghazal,
Karachi
on
Nov, 10 2016
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یہ سو لفظی کہانی تو ہر گز نہیں۔
ایسا لگ رہا ہے کوئی نثری آزاد نظم پڑھی جا رہی ہے۔
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By:
Ibn e Niaz,
Multan
on
Nov, 09 2016
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Gud one!
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By:
nusratyousuf,
khi
on
Nov, 09 2016
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4
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By:
Haya Ghazal,
Karachi
on
Nov, 24 2016
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mubarak ho Haya ..... Allah aap ko mazeed kamiyabiyo say nawazay
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By:
farah ejaz,
Karachi
on
Nov, 09 2016
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There is no start and opening. The idea is in air
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By:
Apkadamad,
LHR
on
Nov, 09 2016
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| حیا غزل صاحبہ آپ کو جیت مبارک ہو۔ |
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By:
H/Dr Ch Tanweer Sarwar,
Lahore
on
Nov, 09 2016
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| آپ نے معاشرے کے ایسے موضوع پر قلم اٹھایا ہے جس پر لکھنا تو دور کوئی بات نہیں کرنا چاہتا۔ بہت خوب۔ |
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By:
Sh. Khalid Zahid,
Karachi
on
Nov, 09 2016
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behtareen kahani Haya .... aap ki kahani yahan daikh ker khushi huyee
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By:
farah ejaz,
Karachi
on
Nov, 08 2016
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Behtreen haya ☺
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By:
diya,
Karachi
on
Nov, 07 2016
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apki kahani ka mauzu aur words selection bht psnd ayi mje. khush rhen.
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By:
Farheen Naz Tariq,
Chakwal
on
Nov, 04 2016
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Very nice 100% / 100% hart touching
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By:
Zaman,
Lahore
on
Nov, 01 2016
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