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Assalamallikum ! Umama Khan G, Aapne thou Mohabbat ke srif doo hi mukkam baatayeah....(Mohabbat aur Izaat) aur bhi hai. Agar mohabaat mein uss ka naam bhi ek baar len thou woh izaat hogi.... Waise aap ke kahani mein ek Mulakhat zharoori thi......Chatting se pyar nahi hota....... "Marriage does not guarantee you will be together forever, it's only paper. It takes love, respect, trust, understanding, friendship and faith in your relationship to make it last. Thanks
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By:
Azam,
Johannesburg
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Jul, 08 2017
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walaikum assalam, you r right bro but ye aik real story hain jo khoch main ni is story mai likha hain wo sab sach hain ,,,,,,,,,, dono ki kabi mulaqat howe he nhe ty just chatting he karte te or chatting se pyar hota hain ya nhe ye muje nhe pata,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, thxxx for comment.
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Jul, 10 2017
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Nice..
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Ali Raza,
Rawalpindi
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May, 07 2017
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wah zaberdast esa laga jese me koe haqiqat sun raha hon really esa feel howa k ye to mere as aps jo ho arah he bilkul wahi he lugta he boht dil se likhi he bilkul sachi baten lugtyu hen.ap ne to rola hi deya but khoshi hoe in the end sub acha hogaya ager ye sachi story he to mery dua he k dono piyar kerne walon ke dil me hamesha boht piyar ore 1 dosre ke leye izat rahe ore allah pak enhen aps me mila de sary zindgi her pul khoshyan naseeb kare ameen suma ameen
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By:
Ahmed khan,
karachi
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Apr, 02 2017
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ameen :)
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Zeena,
Lahore
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Apr, 03 2017
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Nice Story But ending with too sad uffffffffffff , Missing Some one so many ,,,,,,,, ohhhhhhh
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By:
Anjoom,
Hyderabad
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Mar, 27 2017
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بہت زبردست اور حقیقت پر مبنی سٹوری تھی بہنا۔ایک ایک لفظ حقیقت پر مبنی تھا۔بہت خوب لکھا اور شاعری بھی بہترین تھی۔ |
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By:
Abdul Kabeer,
Okara
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Mar, 15 2017
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thanks
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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Ummaa sweety itna sad end??bt sahi kiaaa u know ezzat se bharh kr kuch important nhi larki ke lea!!!!!khush rahn hameshaaaaaa ameen
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By:
diya khan,
islamabad
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Mar, 13 2017
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ye true story hai diya is ka end yahe ta....... bad mai happy howa
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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Umama v v nice!!!bht zabardast novel hy!!!keep it up
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By:
diya khan,
islamabad
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Mar, 13 2017
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thanks a lot diya sis
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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umama sister great novel likha hai ap ni,,,, end happy hota to zaida maza ata,,, kya ye real story hain?please reply me
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By:
hafza saeed,
lahore
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Mar, 12 2017
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g hafza ye real hain,,,,,,,,, thxxx for comment
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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Very Very Nice dear Buaht Kaamaal ke writing ha apkee Hamesha ese trah lek ke ate ho aur lekty Rehna , Hamesha Khush raho Hareera from
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By:
Hareera,
Nasrat Khail
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Mar, 11 2017
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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Uff Nice dear apke writting buht ache ha pata nhe ap kon ho aur kaha sy ho leken mujy buhat pasand ate ha apke wrtting ka style apke story k andaaz bayaan, ap kuch aise he lekty ho kh mujy lekny ka wish paida hogia ha , please m apka big fan ho ap ese traha continue lekty rehana jab sy web p ata ho aur apky koi new story daikta ho mujy buhat khushee hote ha aur jaldi jaldi osko read krta ho, apka Fan Dir Lower, KPK sy
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By:
Rahmaan,
Dir Lower
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Mar, 11 2017
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thanks bhai
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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So sad in Last Uffff, but its real. even i know some people maybe some people will also know this in real
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Hamid,
Hyderabad
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Mar, 10 2017
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nice umama khan very good, missing some one special so your stories make me happy a lot...... By Hamid Hyderabd sindh
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Hamid,
Hyderabad
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Mar, 10 2017
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thanks bhai
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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محبت آگ جیسی ہے کبھی راحت دیتی ہے کبھی جلا کر راگ کر دیتی ہے
Rola diya 😭 |
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By:
abrish anmol,
sargodha
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Mar, 07 2017
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o my good ...outstanding mery pas ilfaz nahe hy lykn me boht kuch khna chati ho article kiکبھی یہ دھوپ جیسی ہے کبھی مسرور کرتی ہے کبھی یہ روگ دیتی ہے کسی کا چین بنتی ہے کسی کو رول دیتی ہے outstanding this line osam
Love is not over yet, it is the beginning and the end asoal its decline started yet is separated from the body of the soul, the heart of impossible love, but it is possible to
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By:
abrish anmol,
sargodha
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Mar, 07 2017
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thanks a lot abrish sister
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By:
umama khan,
kohat
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Mar, 21 2017
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