ھم نے پھر خواب سی آنکھوں میں جلائے آنسو

Poet: SHABEEB HASHMI
By: SHABEEB HASHMI, Al-Khobar

ھم نے پھر خواب سی آنکھوں میں جلائے آنسؤ
دل کو یوں روگ لگا ہر شام کو مہکائے آنسؤ

تجھے فرصت نہ ملی آ کے مجھے دیکھ تو لے
ھم نے پھر رات کی خاموشی میں بہائے آنسؤ

درد کی سولی پہ تھے لٹکے ھوئے جذبات میرے
یوں غم کی چادر میں بڑی دیر سے چھپائے آنسؤ

تیری بے وفائی کا جو صدمہ تھا وہ ھم سہہ نہ سکے
پھر یوں ٹوٹے کہ بڑی دیر تک تھے پچھتائے آنسؤ

دیکھنے والا بھی یہ سمجھے کہ ابھی ھوش میں ہیں
اپنی آنکھوں کے دریچؤں میں یوں سجائے آنسؤ

اور خود فریبی میں تیری چاھت کا سفر کیسے ھو
یوں میری ہستی کو بڑی دیر سے رلائے آنسؤ

غم بھلانے کے لیے تیری محفل میں چلا آتا ھوں
ساقی تیرے مہ خانے میں یوں کچھ دیر بہلائے آنسؤ
 

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18 Mar, 2013

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Reviews & Comments

Shabeeb Bhai thanks for nice creation .. I love your poetries all having very different subjects and
beautiful ideas . bahut khush rahian aur yun hi likhtay rahain. Ameen
Sameer

By: Sameer, Dammam on Mar, 28 2013

Thanks Sameer for your liking and very nice comments....
Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Apr, 01 2013

Shabeeb bhaee so nice and beautiful
sharing with us.all the verses have
novelty of ideas and much poetic beauty in it.
congratulation on such a marvelous poetic
creation
be happy with all the beauties and joys
of life

By: dr.zahid sheikh, lahore,pakistan on Mar, 23 2013

Thanks Dr Sahib .. ap mehfil main tashreef laye ronaq cha gai.. ap ko meri yeh ghazal pasand aye main dil say ap ka shukria ada karta hoon .. ap ki mubarakbad aur good wishes bahut bahut shukria, my poetry was not completed with out your comments. Thanks Again.. with
Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi.
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-khobar on Mar, 23 2013

Shabeeb Bhai,
Bohat Umda Kawish hai. aansoo bator radeef istemal kerna is liye bhi aasaan nahi k is se jurrey qafiye sirf chnad asha'r ki had tak tu saath detey hain phir majbooran yaksa'n mazmoon ki takrar kerni perrti hai, mager aap ne is takleeq ko pehley shair se aakhri shair tak bohat hi khoobi se nibhaya hai, jis k liye bila shubah aap daad wo tehseen k mustehaq hain.

By: Sarwar Farhan Sarwar, Karachi on Mar, 21 2013

Sarwar Bhai ... Thanks for such a wonderful comments..............
I really enjoyed your very nice comments, your appreciation proving that you have very good knowledge in poetry field, I always reading your comments which time to time you are posting to all poets in Hamariweb and this comments showing us right path of poetry. I am really glad to see and read your remarks....................Be Happy always with Great Smile................
Shabeeb Hashmi.........
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 21 2013

VERY NICE HEART TOUCH POETRY.. HASHMI SAHIB YOU WRITE SO WELL AS USUAL .. ANSOO KI TAMAM REALITY KO BAHTREEN ANDAZ MAIN AP NY EXPLAIN KIA HAI JO DIL BHA GIA.. YOU ARE ALWAYS GIVEING US VERY NICE TOPICS IN YOUR POETRIES. AP KO MERI TARAF SY BAHUT ZIAD DAAD KABOOL HO.
JAZEB

By: JAZEB, JEDDAH on Mar, 21 2013

Thanks Dear Jazeb I am happy to see you after long time, today I read your new poetries also very good and fantastic.. you like my poetry and support me in very nice words. Really I appreciate your comments. Be happy always with great smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 21 2013

no praising words r their for such a trumendous poertry sir.. keep it up

By: sadia, Islamabad on Mar, 21 2013

Thanks Ms. Sadia for you appreciation in very nice and humble way. I rally appreciate your comments. Be Happy always with great smile..
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 23 2013

Shabeeb Bro
Wow
Ur poem is superb
With the zest of sadness its
deep in meanings
Extremeness of sorrow can be felt
easily........
Anso,on ki zaban barri powerful hoti hai
Shabeeb......
Basharteke koi un aanso,on ki zaban ko
koi samjhney wala ho ya jo un ki qadar
o qeemat ko samjhta ho............
warna baqaul e shayar
Kisi ke aik aansoo par hazaron dil taraptey hain
kisi ka umer bhar rwna yoonhi baikaar jaata hai
Ghal main dard ki gehraee aur shiddat ka aks
namayan hai aur kalam ko put asar bhi banata hai.
Daad ke moti
Duaon ke nageeney
hazir hain
(Khuda aap ko hamesha Aanso,on se door rakhey Amin )

By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Mar, 20 2013

Thanks Sis Azra ..
Ap nay hamesha aik behan bn kr jis tarha meri hosla afzai ki hay wo cheez ap ki shakhsiyat ko aur numayan karti hai. Belive me mujhy dili musarat hoti hai ap k comments parh kr. ap ny jis trha aur jis shandar andaz main alfazon k jado say meri support ki hai ussny meray dil main aur ziada mehnat sy likhny k hosla paida kia hai..
jee ap ny thek kaha anso dil ki zuban hotay hain aur hr baat ayan kr detay hain, some time insan udasi main her baat qlam ki nook sy kagz py bekhair deta hai.. ap aik intahi purkhalos shakhsiyt ki malik hain ap ki duaoon aur daad ka dheron shukria.. May Allah bless you always. Ameen
Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 20 2013

shabeeb bhai the Great...
Nice poetry...really outstanding...sad but having deep[ emotions of love...
You always write so uniquely
dekhnay wala ye samjhay keh abhi hosh main hain
apni ankhon ke dareechon main yun sajai aansoo.............
What a m,arvelous selection of words.....Heart thrilling gazal u write and every sher is excillent....
khud frebi main teri chaht ka safr kaisay ho......wah wah kya haqeeqat byan ki hy aap nay....life mostly khudfrebiyon ka majmooa hy jin main say kuchh hi haqeeqat ko touch krti hain......Ap nay mare dil ki baat kahi iss sher main....i really like your poetries coz it is worth to like... wonderful...hmesha khush rhain..best wishes

By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Mar, 20 2013

Thanks Nawaz Bhai The Great ....
Itnay khobsorat andaz main sahran yeh sirf ap ka hi khasa hai.. aik aik lfz aur aik aik shair ki jis tarha ap ny tareef ki hai ussny to sabat kr dia hai k ap k alfaz ap ki shandar shakhsiyat k aina dar hain. Insan apny bolny aur likhny sy pahchana jata hai k uski talemi aur khandnai kabliyat kia hai jo ap hamesha prove krty hain aur dil ko rahat milti hai k ap jaisy dostoon say aik mohabat aur elam ka rishta qaim hai.. Allah ap ko hamesha khush rkhay abad aur shad rakhay.. Ameen
Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 20 2013

Very Very nice poetry.. way of expression are super all shair are having high profile.
Easy to understand .. I like to much and passing you lot of good wishes for your future in this field.
Khush Rahain.. Amin
ShahBano
Dammam

By: ShahBano, Dammam on Mar, 19 2013

Thanks Shahbano for your nice comments , as usual you encourage me a lot. Thanks again.
Be Happy always with great smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 20 2013

Very Nice and impressive poetry..
S......K

By: S.K, KSA on Mar, 19 2013

Thanks S.K for comments..
Be Happy always with great smile
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 19 2013

Zabrdast
zbrdast
amzing
sad version me ap ne kamal ki tooty huye jazbt ki gazal wirte ki ha.
Allah apko hamesha khush rhky bhai.

By: Maria, Hnbd on Mar, 19 2013

Thanks Maria you like the poetry and post very good comments with lot of good wishes, I really appreciate your concern for poetry, Be happy always with great smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 20 2013

جناب ہاشمی صاحب کیا کہنے آپ کے ایسا عمدہ کلام پڑھ کر خودبخود دل اداس ہو جاتا ہے۔ ایسی پر سوز اور المیہ شاعری ہے آپ کی۔۔۔۔۔مجھے بے حد پسند ہے۔ داد وصول کریں اللہ آپ کو خوش رکھے۔

By: jamil Hashmi, Rawalpindi on Mar, 18 2013

شکریہ جمیل بھائی ۔۔۔۔ آب کو غزل پسند آئی اور میری حوصلہء افزائی ھوئی ۔ بس جب کوئی خیال اور واقعہ اداس کرتا ھے تو ذھنی انتشار قلم کے راستے کاغذ پر آ جاتا ھے ۔۔۔ آپکی داد کا بے حد شکریہ ۔۔
خوش رہیں ۔ آمین ۔۔۔
شبیب ھاشمی ۔۔
By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Mar, 19 2013
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