شاہین ! پہ لازم ھے تیری تعظیم کرنا

Poet: Shaheen Mughal
By: Shaheen Mughal, gjn

 وضاحتیں مت مانگو جناب رہنے دو
سب سمجھتے ھو تو جواب رہنے دو

زخم کس قدر لگے اور کتنے گہرے
تم بس چلاؤ تیر حساب رہنے دو

جھلسنا ھے مقدر میں ،یونہی سہی
تم رہو سائے تلے مجھ پہ آفتاب رہنے دو

میری نیکیوں کا ثواب سب تم لے لو
میرے حصے میں بس عذاب رہنے دو

شاہین ! پہ لازم ھے تیری تعظیم کرنا
تم پہ جو قرض ھے وہ بے حساب رہنے دو

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27 Jan, 2013

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beautiful verses I ever read on this web...keep it up

By: ابّو من , Islamabad on Feb, 16 2013

SIR !
vvv thanks . aap ne sraha mujhay behudd khushe hoe ,aap bhe to different andaz main
likhtay hain .nice .
aap ne mere old poetry read frmaye behudd nwazish .mgr mujhay behudd khushee ho ge jub aap
page 2 p meere fresh gazal read fryen gay ,
once again thanks .khush rahain ameen .
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 16 2013

Wow shahen sahiba mza agya aap to shabeb se bht acha likhti hen

By: Hinagul, Peshawar on Feb, 13 2013

DEAR SIS HINAGUL SAHIBA ! very sorry .main ne by chance ye page open kea to aap k comments
mujhay nazar aaye main aap ko late thanks p behudd sharminda hoon .
nahee main SIR SHABEED sahib se abhee buhat peechay hoon ,main unn k klaam se buhat mutaasir hoon . aur abhee unn se hargiz achha nahe likhtee .
aap ne klaam psand frmaya ,mujhay khushee hoe , touch main rahain .
khush rahain shaad o abaad rahain ,aur meeray achha likhnay ke duaa
zaroor frmatee rahain ,ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 16 2013

SHAHEEN SAHIBA
what a lovely and beautifull poetry .
nice words . nice gazal .

By: MUQEEM ASLAM, gjn,Pakistan on Feb, 01 2013

thanx a lot on your beautifull
and nice comments .
be happy happy always
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

SHAHEEN SAHIBA aap ko late comments de raha hoon sorry .
aap ke ye gazal mujhay behudd psand hai .
kia khoob likhtee ho mgr itna kum kion likhtee hain.
aap ko ALLAH TA,ALA khush rakhain ameen .
adab ke dunya main aap giraan qaddar azafa hain .
iss azafa main mzeed azafa krain , plz likhtee rahain k aap ke ye gazal aik
khobsurat shahkaar hai . daad k saath duaeen bhe qabool frmayen .

By: Shaheen Mughal, gjn,Pakistan on Feb, 01 2013

مخترم شاہین صاحب ! آپ نے پھر مجھے میرے نام سے کومینٹس دیئے ہین ۔ یہ تو خدا کے بعد آپ ھی جانتے ہیں کہ تنگ کر رہے ہیں کہ آپ واقعی میرے ہم نام ہیں۔
مگر یاد رکھیں کہ شر پھیلانے والے کو نہ دنیا مین معافی ہیں نہ آخرت میں ۔
مسلمان وہ ھے جس کی زبان اور ہاتھ سے دوسرے مسلمان مخفوظ رہیں ۔
آپ پلیز میری باتوں پہ غور فرمائیے گا ۔خدا ہم سب کو ہدایت دے آمین ثم آمین
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala,Pakistan on Feb, 01 2013

DECLARATION TO THE READERS

This poetry belongs to SHAHEEN Sis and by mistake I ( Azra Naz ) have replied some of comments that were for SHAHEEN.I was my own folder and was replying to the comments and didn't notice that I had jumped to Shaheen's folder.So by mistake I have replied some of comments by thinking that Im on my own folder.

SOORY FOR THIS MISTAKE AND SORRY FOR INCONVINIENCE ACCURD TO THE READERS?

By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

Oh my God what did I do? Dear Shaheen main apne previous page par comments ka jawab detey detey be kheyali main aap ki ghazal par click kar dia aur bina daikhey ke aap ka pge khula huwa hai comments main aap ka nam daikh kar hair an ho rahi thi aur apna folder samjh kar kuch comments ka jawab likh dia.Jab page ke oopar waley his sey ko daikh a to nosh ur gaye ke yes Kia ghalti ho gayee mujh se.Im sorry Shaheen yeh by mistake huwa hai iradatan har giz nahin.Please Yeh ghalti se ho Gaya Ab samjh main nahin aa raha Kia karoon.Mujhey bohat bohat bohat bura lag raha hai.Aap bohat dinon se web se bhi ghayeb hain.Aap ke naye Kalam ka bhi intizaar hai.Please behana meri is an janey main ki gayee ghalti ko muaaf karna.

By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

My Sweetest Sister Shaheen thanks for ur sweetness.I am free of worries and tension now.U did not mind it I am grateful to u.I missed u so much really.U r not only a good poetess but a lovely human as well.Thanks.Be happy and God bless u dear.
By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Feb, 03 2013
DEAR SIS AZRA NAZ SAHIBA G !
MY DEAR aaj kafee dinn baad kuch naguzeer wajohaat ke binna p web open na kr payee aur na
kisee k bhe comments ka ans na de sakke .
jiss ke wajja se main sub se mazrat khwaah hoon .
mujhay behudd burra lagg raha hay waqaee burra lagg raha hai jo aap baar baar sorry kr rahee
hain . aisa kia ho gaya jiss ke wajja se aap itna worried ho rahee hain .
mistake iss tarrah ke kise se bhe anjanay main ho saktee hain .
aur plz baar baar sorry kr k mujhay mere nazroon main sharminda na krain plzzzzzzzzz Dear Sis.
aap ke buhat qaddar hai mere dill main aur main to khush hoe k mere gair moujodgee main aap ne mera work kea k mere hissay k comments pas keay . plz feel na krain plzzz
aap ko pata hai k iss se aik baat mujhay kia pata challe hai k aap na sirraf barray pyaar se mere poetry read krte hain blk mujhay miss bhe krtee hain jo k mere leay baesse fakhar hai .
aap ne mujhay kitna miss kea ye soch soch k main khushee aur fakhar se jessay jhoom rahee hoon . ab to aap tension free ho jaye k main ne burra nahe mnaya blk aik naqable byaan rahat feel ke hai aur kr bhe rahee hoon .
main apna klaam zaroor send kroon ge k jiss ke itne pyaree aur qable fakhar behan hoo,uss ke frmaesh radd krna mere leay mummkin nahe .
to Dear hameesha khush rahain , muskratee rahain , shad o abad rahain , apne duaoon main yaad rakhain . ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

Mohtrama shaheen sahiba aaj subhu savere aik
dost ne phone kiya aur baton baton mein
aap ki iss gazal ka zikr hua wo kehne lage
ke aap yeh gazal zaroor padhien mein ne
usi waqat internet peh aap ki gazal
padhi tou aik sahar taari ho gya aur
bhi sabi lougon ka kalam dekha sab
khubsoort lkhte hain aap kabi holiday
na kiya karien Allah kare zor e qalam
aur zyada.........Mohsin

By: Mohsin, Deena on Jan, 29 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR MOHSIN SAHIB !
AAJ kafee dinn baad web open krne ka mouqa milla to aap k comment read kr k behudd
hairat aur khushee bhe hoe .
hairat k aap k friend ne subhu svere aap ko gazal read krne ke taqeed frmaye aur aap ne
usi waqt gazal read kr k itne daad bharray comments de dalay . behudd shukrya .
aap k iss andaz main mujhay kuch housla dea k mere hum khayal aur bhe hain k jo
mere gazal ko like krtay hain kabhe direct aur kabhe indirect .
aap ke dost aur aap ka beinteha shukrya k aap ne meera buhat ikhtraam bharray andaaz main houlabarrhaya .
main koshish kr rahee hoon k apna life timetable iss tarrah set kroon k touch main rahoon .
once again thanks with deep respect liking my potry.
hameesha khush rahain ,jeetay rahain .ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013
Bohat bohat shukria Mohsin.Aaj itefaq se main ne yeh page khola to aap ke comments daikhey.Aap ki Zarrah nawazi ke liye dil ki gehraion se mamnoon hoon.Pata nahin aap yeh jawab daikh pain ge ya nahin magar phir bhi aap ke comments ka shukria Ada karna bohat zaroori tha.Khush rahiye.Jeetey rahiye.
By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

GOOD POETRY AISA LAGTA HY KAHIN PARHI HAY.KHAIR ACHI HY

By: SEHAR, hyderabad on Jan, 29 2013

RESPECTABLE AND DEAR SIS SEHAR SAHIBA !
THANKS aap ko poetry psand aaye . aur aap ne apne qeemtee waqt aur daad se mujhay
nwaza. once again thanks .
aap ne poetry read ke ho gee k mere gazals colleg magzine main aur newspaper main bhe chup jatee hain jab kabhee waqt millay to send krtee rehtee hoon .
aap ke daad p buhat buhat shukrya .
dear sis aaenda bhe touch main rehna .
hameesha khush aur shad o abad rahain .ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013
Zaroor parrhi hogi Dear Sehar kionke meri ghazalain Pakistan ke akhbarat o rasa y'all main bhi cchapti rahi hain aur main baqayeda mushairey bhi attend karti rahi hoon.Shukria.Aainda bhi rai se nawaziey ga.
By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

Nice expression of inner feelings, nice choice of words, and dil-soz lehja. I liked it

By: anwar kazimi, Mississauga, Canada on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR ANWAR KAZIMI SAHIB !
THANX a lot
your nice and fantastic comments just like a beautifull awards to me .
thanks with deep respect .
be happy happy always ameen summa ameen .
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013
Thanks a lot Anwar.So sweet u went on last page to see my previous poetry.Thanks from the bottom of my heart.Khush rahiye aur jeetey rahiye.
By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

DEAR SHAHEEN SIS !kia kehnay behna , itne dair ,aisee kia narazgee
hai k maheeno baad apne shakkal blk klaam ke shakkal dekhate hain .
sis agr khudda ne aap ko ye funn dea hai aur barra he ummda bhe to kion
apne parrhney waloon ko tarsaate hoo.
k itnee dair baad iss wab p tashreef latee hain .
buss aate ho aur mere dill p chhaaa jatee ho .
mere jaan az azeez behann itne doore se faslay aur barrh jatay hain .
bus inn raha kro k main buhat yaad krtee hoon .
aap ke saare he gazal qable daad hai .pyaree behan .khush rahoo.

By: GazalaM, multan on Jan, 28 2013

PYAREE AUR MUKHLIS SIS GAZALA G!
hameesha khush rahoo.aur apne pyaray pyaray comments se nwaztee rahoo.
main aksar dair ke wajja btatee rehte hoon mgr aap ke muhabbat hai k main
koshish kr rahee hoon k aap mujh se naraz na hoon k jald se jald online hoa
kroon .
aap ka dill barra he khoob hai k itna intezaar krtee hoo.
sweet sis anqreeb saray hee shikway door kr doon ge .
daad ka be hudd shukrya .
hameesha khush rahoo.ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013
Shayer ghalat folder par aap ne comments kar diye Dear Ghazala.Its my poetry.Im Azra Naz not Shaheen.Anyway thanks for liking my poetry if these comments r for me.Be happy and God bless u dear Sis.Keep in touch in future as well.
By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 31 2013

HI SHAHEEN !
LAJWAB ,SHANDAAR , NEHAYAT HE PYARE KLAAM HAI .
KIA KHOOB LIKA K SHAHEEN P LAZIM HAI TERE TAZEEM KRNA
TUM P JO QARZ HAI WO BEHISAAB REHNAY DO.
KIA HE ZABRDAST GAZAL HAI.MAIN NE AAJ TAK AAP KE GAZAL K JESSE GAZAL KAHEEN NAHEE PARRHE .
PLZ KEEP WRITING .

By: hasham , gjn,Pakistan on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR HASHIM SAHIB !
AAP K comments bhe barray he shandaar aur lajwab hotay hain k
aksar mere pass aap ka shukrya ada krne k alfaaz bhe nahe hotay .
aap ko klaam psand aaya mzeed housla barrha .k likhoon .
aap ke zarra nwazee hai k main baar baar itna achha likhny waloon main
aane ke himmat kr patee hoon .
hameesha khush rahain aur muskratay rahain .isse tarrah himmat barrhatay rahain .ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

Shaheen sahiba aap ne likha hai ke phool
proye hain bhut pyara guldasta bnaya hai
hum mehfil mein rehien ya na rehien aap
sda likhti rehna kisi sar phire ki baton
ko dil se lga kar shayari na cuorna
aap ki kitab ka behsabri se intezar
reh ga ......zindgi mein kaisa bhi
mousam aaye likhna kabi na chourna
you are a great poetess be happy
Asghr

By: asghr, birmingham on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECABLE JNAB ASGHAR SAHIB !
hameesha ke tarrah aap ke comments mere leay housla afza hain .
aap ka daad ka different style mujhay behudd achha lagta hai .
ye aap ne kia frma dea k aap mehfil main rahain na rahain aap likhte rahain .
to main ye arz krna chahoon ge k aap sub ko main apne family tsawar krtee hoon
agr koi aik bhe mehfil se gaya to mujhay to behudd dukh ho ga .so plz aap aisee baat na
krain k aik mukhtalif aur achha likhnay walay se hum sub mehroom nahe hona chahtay.
main kise ko bhe sar phirra nahe samjhtee k mujhay lagta hai k mujh se barra sar phirra aur
koi nahe .
sir aik do gazlain likhney se kitaab nahe bantee . mgr phir bhe main ye koshish zaroor kroon ge
k aap ne mujh se ummed bandhe hai wo na tootay .main kabhe kabhe sahee mgr likhtee zaroor
rahoon ge mgr aap se bhe deep request hai k aap bhe likhtay rahain k hum jessay iss se kuch na kuch blk buhat kuch seekhtay rehtay hain .
plz great poet mat kahain k main to abhe poet kehlanay k laeq he nahee .
plz agr aap ko mere koi bhe baat burre laggay to muaaf frma dea krain k
barray chooton ko muaaf nahe frmayen gay to hum kesay seekhayn gay.
aap hameesha khush rahain .shado abad rahain .ameen summa ameen.
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

MASH ALLAH BOHAT KHOOB LIKHA BE HAPPY

By: dr.zahid sheikh, lahore,pakistan on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR DR . ZAHID SAHIB !
AAP ka mukhtasar mgr jamea tabsra mere leay kisee inaam o gift se kisse bhe sorat kum nahe hai .
mere leay to ye aik sand ke haseyat rakhta hai .
aap ne apne yaddasht mai mujhay rakhaa behudd nwazish .
zarra nwazee hai aap ke .
hameesha khush rahain ,shad o abad rahain .ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

Dear Shaheen Sis Very Beautiful Poetry i realy like it ........... be happy always & keep write

By: AF(Lucky), Saudi Arabia on Jan, 28 2013

PYARI SIS AF (LUCKY ) SAHIBA G !
BEHUDD shukraya gazal psand krnay ka .
aap k comments mere leay baesse rahat hain .
daad ka behudd shukrya .
dear hameesha khush rahoo . aur apny pyare pyare comments se nwaztee rahain .
hameesha mukraen aur shad o abad rahain ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

Wah wah wah.Lajwab.Superb.Mind blowing.Kia kahoon.Aisi khobbsurat shayari parrh kar dil roshan ho gia.Boat umda keyalat,be ad gehrey aur shadeed jazbon ka izhar.Mehboob ke samney ijz-o-inkasaar aur sar-e-tasleem kham karney ki adaa,aur sitam uthaney ka hosla aur apni khushian kisi ki nazar kar key us ke dard apney daman main samaitney ki khawahish.Har sher dil pazeer aur har lafz main jazbon ki sachhai.Daad ke phool aur duaon ke nazraney aap ki nazar karti hoon.

By: Azra Naz, Reading UK on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE DEAR SIS "THE QUEEN OF WORDS AZRA NAZ SAHIBA G !
AAP k itny khoobsurat aur pyare comments read kr k mera dill o dmaag roshan ho gaya .
ummda khayalat aur shadeed jazboon ko wo he samajh saktay hain jo khud jazba shnaas hoo .
aur aap k har comments ye he sabit krtay hain k aap main ye khoobe paye jatee hai .
aap k comments yaqeen manain mere leay aik barra he anmol tuhfa hain .
aur main ye tuhfa jo mujhay har poetry p millta hai. millnay p khudd ko khush qismat samjhtee hoon .
aap k comments aap ke bharpoor daad ka andaaz to mere dill main uttar gaya hai .
mere pass shukrya k leay alfaaz he kum hain .
aap k shafqat bharray duaeen main ne apnay dill main sanmbhaal le hain . aur aap k leay shadeed duaa go hai k khush rahain . hameesha shad o abaad rahain .ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

It is superb creation Shaheen Sahiba.....Your narrated in purely true sentiments and nice tone "Rehne do". Please accept my appreciations.......God bless you.......

By: jamil Hashmi, Rawalpindi on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR JAMIL HASHMI SAHIB !
I really thankfull to you on your beautiful and superb comments .
your unique comments just like a golden awards to me .
I accept your appreciation with deep respect .
always be happy happy .ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Feb, 01 2013

good Shaeen dear itny din bad ap nay apna kalam peesh kiya buhat acha laga phar kar attends complete karo itni chutiya nae karty aenda aisa mat karna.i miss u and your poetry.ap ke kawish buhat khuburat ha phar kar dil bhag bhag hu giya ha.khush rahu

By: Ayesha khan, D,punjab on Jan, 28 2013

MY DEAR SWEET SIS AYESHA KHAN G !
PYAREE BEHNA !KESE HAIN .kia kroon life kuch aisy busy hai aur waisy agr fursat mill bhe jaye to kabhe light nahe to kabhee net signal nahi . ye to aap sub ke muhabbat hai jo kuch na kuch likhnay ke koshish krte rehtee hoon .
i also miss you and your comments too.
ok dear chuttyaan na krne ke koshish kroon ge .
aap ne itne pyaar bharre daad de k meera mann bhe baagh baagh ho gaya .
aap ke tarrah aap ke comments bhe barray he khoobsurat hain .
hameesha khush rahain . ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Jan, 31 2013

Shaheen this is the one of best poetry creat by you. I like and giving you 100 out of 100, that is the fantastic poetry with beautifull words. Be Happy Always with Great Smile ...
Shabeeb Hashmi
Al-Khobar

By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Jan, 28 2013

RESPECTABLE SIR SHABEEB HASHMI SAHIB !
AAP ke zarra nwaze hai . aap k itne daad bharray comments k leay mere pas shukrya k alfaaz nahe .aap jessay itne bakmaal poet agr mujhay housla afzaee itnay shafqat bharray andaaz main frmayen gay to wo merey leay kisee sanad se kum nahee . aap ne itney achhay marks de deye jo iss se pehlay mujhay math main miltay they.mgr aaj aap ne bhe 100 out 100 marks deay ye main ne bakhushee qabool kr leay hain wo bhe dill ke gehrayoon se barray he ikhtraam k saath.aur ab to ye khwahish shadeed ho gaye hai k ye number kum na hoon blk baar baar millayen iss k leay aap ke duaoon aur mufeed mashwaroon ke zaroorat hai.
once again thanks on your beautiful and nice comments . your comments is also very fantastic .and just like a awards to me .
Be also happy happy always . ameen summa ameen
By: ShaheenMughal, Gujranwala on Jan, 31 2013
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