ذرا سا روٹھ جانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

Poet: muhammad nawaz
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill

ذرا سا روٹھ جانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو
حقیقت کو چھپانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

جہاں پر حسن کی آوارگی نے رکھے تھے پاؤں
وہاں پلکیں بچھانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

جسی دیکھے بنا دھڑکن پہ اک انکار رہتا ہے
اسے یونہی ستانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

ابھی تک ناشناسائی ہے جن بیتاب آنکھوں میں
انہیں اپنا بنانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

کبھی ان خواہشوں پر بھی کوئی بند باندھ پایا ہے؟
اسے اس سے چرانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

پڑے ہیں استراحت میں جو لمحے دل کے پہلو میں
انہیں اب گدگدانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

ہواؤں سے چکور اک کہہ رہی تھی شوخ لہجے میں
ذرا چندا کو پانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

ذرا ٹھہرو، کہ زلفوں کی گھنیری شام کی خاطر
ستارے توڑ لانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

ابھی بھی ان کہی کی دھند میں لپٹے ہیں جو جذبے
انہیں ہونٹوں پہ لانے کی مجھے کوشش تو کرنے دو

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17 Jun, 2013

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Reviews & Comments

Nice wording

By: AAMIR JOYIA, Dubai on Jul, 08 2013

thnx so much aamitr bhai......best of luck always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 10 2013

amyzing ghazal sir zara sa rooth jany ki mjy koshish to krny do ....... God bless u ( ameen)

By: Aalia baig, Slkt on Jul, 05 2013

thnx so much aalia baig for liking and appreciating in so beautiful words....hmesha khush rhain...best wishes
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 10 2013

══بہت عمدہ زبردست══
♠^♠اچھا انتخاب ہے ہمارے ساتھ شئیر کرنے کا♠^♠
®بہت شکریہ®
»»•Jari Rakhein Aap Ki Aur Achi Achi Sharing Ka Intezar Rahega•»»
Mohammed Masood meadows nottingham uk
__________________


By: Mohammed Masood, Azad Jamu Kashmir on Jul, 04 2013

thnx so much masood bhai...sure i ll try to share all my writings here ..
bundles of thnx for so nice remarks..
hmesha khush rhain..best wishes
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 06 2013

tabahi hai ustad tabahi..... bohut khoob,, mashallah.. kia kehny

By: ibrar karim, gilgit,pakistan on Jul, 02 2013

haha ibrar bhai nice to read your so nice and unique appreciation....
hmesha khush rhain...best of luck always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 04 2013

zara sa rooth janay ki, mujhay koshish to karnay do
wahh wahhh kia khoobsooret khayaal hai
lutf a gaya
khoobsooret ghazal kay liay bohat si daad qabool kijiay janab
bohat ac

By: azharm, Rawalpindi on Jul, 02 2013

thnx so much azharm bhai...
your appreciation is always a reward for me coz you yourself a true
poet and i like your poetries too much...
hmesha khush rhain...best regards always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 04 2013

v nice poetry nawaz bhai itni romentic poetry kya bat hy g styy happy...

By: s.k roop, kirachi on Jun, 21 2013

its ok bhai chalta hy nd duain dene ka shukriya..
By: s.k roop, kirachi on Jul, 04 2013
oh really sorry roop behna...i thought keh may be ur surname is roop...really sorry ...b happy always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jul, 04 2013
hahaha u wlc bhai waise m s.k roop bhai nhe behn hu janab
By: s.k roop, kirachi on Jul, 03 2013
thanks so much S.K Roop bhai....always be happy...best regards
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

Nawaz sahib ...
Boohhhhtt he khob ..
Bohhhtt khobsorat andaz e byaan hy apka ..
Allah bless u ..

By: Shakila anjum, Khanewal on Jun, 21 2013

thnx so much shakila for liking and appreciation...
your words are honour for my poetry...always be happy
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

baut pyara likhtay hayn ap mashaalah.
i like too much

By: Saba, KSA on Jun, 21 2013

thnx saba sahiba for liking...b happy always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

too cute

By: sidra ansari, gujranwala on Jun, 20 2013

thnx sidra...b happy
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

welcome Sir
i was missing your poetries.really.boht zabrdast poetry hain.
koshosh to karnay do.and you know i have passed that exam
as i said to you.now a days free.hostel nhin ajkal home hoon
town main.goodluck always.your words are always awsome
thank you Mr poet

By: Dr. zoya hashmi, KE Med univ Lahore on Jun, 20 2013

thnx zoya for liking and welcome too..
my best wishes always with you.....study should be always first preference...
hmesjha khush rhain...keep in touch..me also bzi these days..
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

Itney khoobsurat ashaar . Aik sey barh ker aik . Really Jawab nahin .Aaap ki jitney bhi tarref ki jayay Kum hai .bohat zabardast .I am very impressed . Allah aap ko hamesha khush rakhey .

By: A.S.Arif , Mississauga on Jun, 19 2013

thnx arif bhai for appreciation in so nice words..
your remarks are really honour for me...best regards always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 26 2013

Hamariweb was missing u a lot.....Khush rahein

By: Siraab, Lahore on Jun, 19 2013

thnx so much siraab sahib/Sahiba
i was also missing web...your name is so unique and i write many poetries on siraab..
mujhay adat hy sirabon ki pichhay chalnay ki
main ne hasil ka taqaza khbi kiya kab tha

hmesha khush rhain...some people are always siraab
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

ji buht khoob hai aap ki ye ghaza l bhi as usual alfaz ka chunao khayal ka bahao mozu ka bayan shandar hai hr lehjaz se
jahan pr husn ki awargi ne rakhai thay paon
wahin palkain bichhanai ki mujhe koshish tau krne do
abhi tk naxnasaui oy jn bitab AnkhwN miN
unhen apna bnane ki mujhe koshish tau krne do
hawaon se chakor ik keh rahi the shokh lehje mein
mujhe chnda ko panai ki zra koshish tau krne do
zra thehro k zulfoN ki ghaneri sham ki khatir
sitarai toR lanai ki mujhe koshishi tau krne do
chalai aao haseen lfzoN kahin se merai takhayul mein
ghazal hq se sarahne ki mujhe koshish tau krne do
kia kamal k ash'ar hain kahan se nadir alfaz pazeerai k lye dryaft kye jaen buht khoob
khush rahain abad rahain likhtai rahain haseen shahkar
isi trah gahe bgahe bar bar

By: uzma, Lahore on Jun, 19 2013

sir ji bundles of thnx...
teachers appreciation is always honour for pupil..
aapki koshish puri tarah kamyaab hui hy and you appreciate
in your so unique way in such a beautiful manners that it seem that
poetry get completion after so nice cmnts...
ab shukria ada krnay ki bhi mujhay koshish to karnay do...
bohat changay laggay tuhaaday remarks...khush rho hasday wasday raho te maan wadhaday rho...
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

ہمیشہ کی طرح بانکپن اور شوخ لہجہ جو آپکے کلام کی پہچان بن گیا ہے
موتی کی طرح الفاظ اور بیان واہ نواز صاحب اچھی لگی آپکی یہ کاوش بھی

By: bint e ali, APWA.Lhr on Jun, 19 2013

thnx so much bint e ali...
your apreciation is really honour for me....thnx for so nice words
hmesha khush rhain...best regards
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

to krain na koshish hmmm
very nice bi=oht khoob shair e maghrib
eid ka chaand.college ka zamana yad aa
gya

By: Komal, Sheikhupura on Jun, 19 2013

thnx so much komal for so nice and komal remarks..
college ka zamana?? memories never die.
hmesha khush rhain...best regards always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

ap zaroor koshish karay,lol, bahtreen poetry , parrh ker bohet accha lgga, stay blessed

By: rizwana, toronto on Jun, 18 2013

thnx rizwana sahiba...ji aap nay boht achha mashwara diya ab aur zyada koshish krni paray gi ,lol,
thnx for so cute and fresh remarks...hmesha muskurati rhain...best regards
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

Q g q koshish krny dyn? Hyn? Bra shoq ha roothany kaaa? Ek punjbi s0ng yad aya
vicharan vicharan kar di wa jadoo vichroon ge pata lag jau ga
anyway very very nice always be happy

By: Maria, Hnbd on Jun, 18 2013

Hyn?? aap to primary teachers ki tarah Soti yaani keh danda le ke hamla awar ho gai hain....
you are right pata lag jta hy jb vichhrta hy koi balkeh lag pata jata hy.........
thnx for so nice smiling remarks...hmesha muskurati rhain..best regards always with all respects
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

Dear Nawaz Bhai the Great ...
First of all WELL COME back... web ki verani khatam howi.. and
ahsta ahsta sb shair dost coming back.. bs dr sahib and Sis Azra ki kami hai..
Really very nice poetry .. with very nice words and feelings...
koshish tu jari rakhni chahey kamyabi Allah daay ga..
When ever you coming back giving us your best always...
Lot of good wishes and Daad k fresh flowers ap ki nazar karta hoon..
Be Happy always with Great Smile

By: Shabeeb Hashmi, Al-Khobar on Jun, 18 2013

thnx so much shabeeb bhai....
Sure all will come back...our all best wishes for every writer of web and hope that Azra sahiba and Zahid bhai will come soon too ......
thnx for appreciation......yes try try again like Nipolian Bonapart Story...
hmesha ki tarah so encouraging and fragrant remarks by you...
hmesha khush rhain...best regards always
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

Your second Ghazal is also like a fresh air in the soul and touch the depth of heart.....Your sentiments are mixed with your philosophical attitude which I always find in your poems.....Well done Nawaz Bhai whenever you appear after interval, you spread a new colour on canvas like abstract art....Please accept my deep emotional sentiments of love for you and lot of garlands of fresh roses.......be happy and stay save......

By: Jamil Hashmi, Rawalpindi on Jun, 18 2013

jamil bhai bundles of thanks...
Your views are always a poets views and you always study the inner
meanings of poetry...really nice to read ur cmnts...
It is great honour for us that so nice people having true
poetic approach like you are here to appreciate our
humble tries to gether some words...
hmesha khush rhain..best wishes
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013

very very nice poetry

By: Sumera Ataria, GUDDU on Jun, 18 2013

thnx so much Sumera for so nice words about my poetry....hmesha khush rhain...best regards
By: muhammad nawaz, sangla hill on Jun, 19 2013
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